I have had so many people say to me, "I don’t know where to
start! How do you do it?’ How do you manage to write a
book?" Well, it may not be as difficult as you fear. The
doing simply is in the knowing how.
Many elements go into any written work, but let’s start with
the basics. Just as you prepared for doing your homework as
a child and young adult, you must also prepare for writing
your manuscript. This isn’t something you can just jump into
and succeed in giving it your best.
First of all, most publishers want your work written in
Microsoft Word. Documents must be single spaced, with no
spaces between paragraphs. Each paragraph with a five space
indent.
This may vary from publisher to publisher, so do your
homework. Go to their website and read their guidelines for
submission.
Today’s publishers want submissions to be in pristine
condition with:
Correct punctuation
Correct grammar
Vigorous editing
If you're trying for traditional publishing, most houses
have their word count limits set between 65 and 100,000
words.
Get an editor on board!
Find a writing/editing partner to work with, whose strengths
do not mirror your own.
For instance, let’s say that you are very good with
dialogue, and they are weak – but they are very good with
punctuation, grammar and verb tense agreement. You can help
each other tremendously. In the end, however, a professional
editor can be invaluable. The publishing world is not what
it used to be. An editor probably will not be provided, and
many works are rejected on bad-editing alone.
Invest in a good writing guide such as Hodges’ Harbrace
College Handbook or Strunk and White’s The Elements
of Style. They will be invaluable to you throughout your
literary career.
Start out with a good outline
Eternal beauties have "good bones." Your book has to have
"good bones" to be a good book – that is, good organization,
a good outline… a good "skeleton." Create an outline for
your book to keep you on track. This doesn’t mean that the
outline can’t change, but if you write out a "road map" for
your work, you won’t get lost before you reach your
destination: the end of your book.
Join a writing group
Many writing groups are set up so that, in order to be
critiqued, you must reciprocate. So if you are active with
other writers, you will get feedback on your work. This is
all done with respect and a desire to help each member
become a better writer. An active writing group is also an
excellent place to find your writing/editing partner.
Learn to take criticism
It’s nice to hear someone say, "Oh, I just love your work!"
But does this help you? Maybe a little, but honest
constructive criticism is your best tool for improving your
writing skills. Sometimes, the people closest to you, are
the worst ones to listen to about your work. They will
either tell you that you are brilliant, when you are not, or
not talented – when you are! Some may even tell you to give
up. Only you can decide if you want to go on, and if the
need within you to write is great, then go for it.
Write, write and then write
Write every day. If you are blocked on your current project,
write a practice exercise. Keep the juices flowing and your
creativity active. Writing is not like riding a bike….if you
get lazy and don’t practice, you will lose a lot of your
skills. The more you practice, the better you will get, but
if you don’t use it, you will lose it.
Practice – indulge yourself in writing exercises.
For instance, pick up a piece of fruit. Smell it, feel it,
taste it. Now write about it. Make your reader smell, feel
and taste that piece of fruit.
Step outside. What do you see, hear? Describe what you see,
hear and smell, so that a reader will feel like they are
there.
And, you’re off!
Now you are prepared to begin your first book. Microsoft
Word is loaded on to your computer. You have your writing
manuals. You also have a writing/editing partner, and your
keyboard is dusted off and ready to go. Now what do you do?
Let us address:
Writing about what you know
Getting your reader’s attention
Setting the Scene
Fleshing out your characters
Dialogue – It can make or break your book
Transitions
Editing
Following are some examples from Jesus Gandhi Oma Mae
Adams.
Write about what you know
If you write about what you know, places you’ve been, and
draw from your own experiences, you will bring to your
writing a unique quality and a reality that will truly speak
to your audience. Sci-fi and fantasy novels are fun to write
and read, but even they must be based on some reality unique
to the author. Draw on your history, and your book will ring
true to your readers.
Get their attention
Any work, whether it is an article, an essay, a novel or a
poem, must start with a first paragraph that is a "grabber."
If you don’t get your reader’s attention immediately, you
will more than likely lose them. Be creative, think about
your story, and give them all you’ve got with your opening
scene:
"Mortified and with shoes in hand, Oma Mae paddled
flatfooted to her office door, her burning feet, swelling
and smacking heavily on the tiled hallway floor. "WOMEN DO
NOT HAVE HOT FLASHES! THEY HAVE POWER SURGES," flashed
across her brain, the words throbbing in her head like a
strobe light on the set of Saturday Night Fever. What in the
hell would Gail Sheehy know about hot flashes! I’ll lay odds
she was popping estrogen pills like they were M&M’s when she
wrote that one, Oma Mae blustered hotly, her breath so hot
she quickly sipped it back in to keep it from scorching the
tender insides of her feverish lips."
Set the Scene
Where does a particular scene happen? Your reader must "see"
what you "see," "hear" what you "hear." Each scene should be
carefully crafted so that your reader can follow the story
with ease:
"Later that evening, Oma Mae went topside after the rest of
the party had settled in their berths for the night. She
made herself comfortable, lying down on a deck chair and
placing her hands behind her head. She laid there watching
the stars and enjoying the soft listing of the ship and the
slap, slap, slap of the waves against the schooner’s wooden
hull. The evening was a little cool, pleasantly so, and
there was a slight wind carrying the scent of salt, a briny
perfume she found enticing; delightful for someone who was
used to the green smell of land-locked Ohio."
Flesh out your characters, but don’t go overboard
When you introduce your characters, flesh them out. Describe
them: color of hair, eyes, height, attitude, perhaps a brief
history. Make them real – a living and breathing character,
but don’t go on forever. I once read a book where it took 20
pages to introduce a character. By the time I got back to
the plot, I’d lost interest. But your readers have to care
about your characters, whether it is to love or hate them.
Ambivalence doesn’t work in successful writing:
"Sylvie Musser stood a mere five feet tall, her height
diminished by a pronounced dowager’s hump, forcing her head
and shoulders forward in a classic osteoporosis slump. Hazel
green eyes, sunk deeply in their sockets, peered beneath
gray brows and above high cheekbones, her facial structure
reminiscent of her Native American great-grandmother. Her
hair, straight and iron gray, was worn in a simple bun
nestling atop her curved spine.
The old woman was thin to the point of gauntness, her frail
frame clothed in a simple summer dress of the kind Oma Mae
had not seen since the early sixties, consisting of a simple
sleeveless shift under a bibbed apron, tied at the waist and
pinned at the shoulders. She wore terry cloth carpet
slippers, their outline stretched and molded by the
arthritic toes encased inside them."
Dialogue – It can make or break your book
Your dialogue should make the reader feel that they are
there, in the moment, eavesdropping, as it were. Stilted
dialogue can make a book drag to the point where your reader
will eventually put the book down, and possibly never pick
it up again.
Listen to the following dialogue…first without description
and then with:
"You know, evolution is impossible." Ray said.
"Impossible?" Oma Mae said.
"Yes. Well, more accurately I guess, is that it is a
miracle. I suppose nothing is impossible; it’s just that
we haven’t come to fully understand evolution yet." he
said. "It goes against natural law."
"Yeah, it would be like reversing the flow of the tides of
the ocean, if I’m understanding what you are saying," Oma
Mae said. "Or the breeze kicking up now and swirling
across the water," she said.
Now, note the difference:
"You know, evolution is impossible." Ray scanned the
horizon of the vast ocean with a slow contemplative sweep
of his head and rested his gaze fully on Oma Mae.
"Impossible?" Oma Mae slanted a disbelieving look at his
statement.
"Yes. Well, more accurately I guess, is that it is a
miracle. I suppose nothing is impossible; it’s just that
we haven’t come to fully understand evolution yet." He
turned sideways toward Oma Mae and rested his elbow on the
railing. "It goes against natural law."
"Yeah, it would be like reversing the flow of the tides of
the ocean, if I’m understanding what you are saying," Oma
Mae contributed. "Or the breeze kicking up now and swirling
across the water." She raised her hands to her hair and
smoothed the tendrils dancing in the wind across her face.
Transitions
Ever watch a good movie where the transitions are so great,
you can’t help but notice them? Take for instance, Avalon.
Released in 1990 and directed by Barry Levinson, it is a
story of three generations of immigrants who try to make a
better life for themselves in America. The first scene ends
with 4th of July fireworks. There are the bright lights, the
booming, and then the smoke…fade to black, with smoke
drifting across the scene, fade in to the grandfather,
blowing smoke from a cigar, and telling his grandchildren of
when he came to America in 1914 on the 4th of July. Now
there is a transition. Your viewers know that a scene has
changed, but there is a connection.
The same holds true with a novel. Each paragraph should lead
into the next. More importantly, each chapter should end
with a transition which leads to the following one. This
keeps your reader interested, and keeps them turning the
page: picking your book up again and again, until they
finish.
Chapter ends with:
"I feel prepared to take this giant step away from the
comfort and security of my mother’s loving arms, and
Patrick’s brotherly protection, and Joy’s sisterly
companionship. Even Mother Mary Clare, as with the others,
must be left to pursue, ‘her own soul development and
growth.’ These wise and wonderful and loving people have
honed me and if I am to do anything of good or service at
all, it will be to them the credit will be owed. Therefore,
it is those four most precious loved-ones to whom I devote
my life, even as I say goodbye."
Next chapter:
"The lonesome faraway echoes of a braying burro were the
only sounds Oma Mae Adams heard as she disembarked the bus
transporting her to the Terminal in the city of Cuenca,
located in the southern highlands of the Andes Mountains in
the south-central region of Ecuador."
Edit, edit and then edit
Clean up your work! You wouldn’t send your son or daughter
to a party with mud on his or her face and dirty and torn
clothes, would you? So why would you send your book, your
"child," out into the world filled with errors in
punctuation, grammar or spelling? Take the time to edit and
then edit again. This is not the time to be lazy.
The End
So, now you have written your book. You’ve made an outline
to help you stay on track, you’ve written a killer first
paragraph to get your reader’s undivided attention, your
scenes and characters are vivid and believable, and your
dialogue is visual and interesting.
You’ve edited and edited to make sure that your punctuation,
spelling and grammar are absolutely correct. You’ve used a
writing/editing partner to read your story and help you with
every aspect of your work, and now you are ready to submit
your "baby" to a publisher or agent.
Your work will receive a great deal more positive attention
because of your apparent effort in creating a quality
product. Good luck in your literary career, and I wish you
every success.